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--O'--
O' how i see the love,
the red heart without blood,
never in my hands,
spread elsewhere in this land.
O' i wish i had the luck,
so my life wouldn't suck,
when life becomes so clear,
i have to disappear.
O' i am not here,
my life, never been so dear,
all that being said,
i'm better off dead.
O' my need so dire,
yet i can't acquire,
and i cannot keep,
what makes their heart beat.
O' how i see the love,
the red heart without blood,
never in my hands,
spread elsewhere in this land.
O' i wish i had the luck,
so my life wouldn't suck,
when life becomes so clear,
i have to disappear.
O' i am not here,
my life, never been so dear,
all that being said,
i'm better off dead.
O' my need so dire,
yet i can't acquire,
and i cannot keep,
what makes their heart beat.
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Old school poem here, judging how far it is in my book i'd say this is late 2009. I was quite Melancholic at this time and everyone seemed to be in this lovey-dovey paradise at school -which never helps- so i poured it into poetry.
For the record, i don't feel as melancholic as i did now and i'm sorry if this ruins someone's day or upsets them a bit but try and look past the sadness and focus on the AABB quatrain
please comment
For the record, i don't feel as melancholic as i did now and i'm sorry if this ruins someone's day or upsets them a bit but try and look past the sadness and focus on the AABB quatrain
please comment
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Awesome dude 
I still need to find mine .w.
I still need to find mine .w.